Friday, June 8, 2007

tomar proti.............................

tumi ki aajo thaktey parbe durey?
ekbaar bhalobesey to durey chole gechho-
diye gechho dusoho kichhu smriti;
kichhu gaan, kichhu sur, kichhu katha- eder kore gechho
chhondoboddho; eder kore gechho apon.
jano, ekhono tomar path cheye bosey achhi.
ekhono tomai dakchhi, ekhono raat jagchhi tomar janyo,
ekhono bhalobaschhi tomakei-
bikolpo ki chhilo naa? chhilo. ami nitey chaini;
ami kauke janatey chaini tomar katha.
janatey chaini nijer atiter byatha,
janatey chaini nijer roktakto hridayer abyakto jantrona,
hoito janatey chaini nijer naa bola ghonisthotar
ekanto muhurter sukhosmritio.
aaj tomar kachhe chaitey esechhi
ek tukro hriday- durey noi, kachhe; aro kachhe.
manner ei gobhir kamona jeno murto hoye othe tomar sparshe!
jeno mukto hoye jetey parey hridayer ruddhadwar!
jeno abaar pran khule ami janatey pari gorber sathe-
ami tomai, hya sudhu tomai, nijer kore peyechhi.

5 comments:

Anando said...

anekdin badey likhlam.

Sabyasachi said...

Kaar proti uddeshyo kore kabitata lekha..khub jaante ichce korche..kono abyokto bedonar utsosthol majhe majhe kintu golkondar kohinoor hirer moto ontorer monikothaye chiro akshaye hoe thake..aneke setake mere phelte chaye..Kintu eta bojhe na je... oi utsoshol-ta bhobisyoter jonyo prorona jogaye...rudho bastobtake chokher samne dekhte sekhaye.....
sedik diye dekhte gele..Abhisek..tumi safol...saamne egiye cholo..pore thak na smritigulo purono diaryr moto...

Mili said...

abhishek....

darun likhecho....simple awesome...
as sabyasachi says, kar jonno likheche, jante amar o bishon icche....

but, i must admit, u r absolutely able to put in ur feeling thru this poem...

keep it up

Anando said...

aro comments wanted!

Paro said...

Jani naa ei lekha taa karo kotha bhebe lekha na shudhui kolpona....
Tobe je bhabei lekha hok naa kano oshadharon!!!! Tobe phele asa somoy smriti hoye thakai bhalo.. akta sopner moto.. tai naa..